Monday 23 April 2012

FACEBOOK!!!

   Facebook was introduce by Mark Zuckenburg in 2004.He proved the world that we can communicate with other people around the world.The main colour of Facebook is blue.The reason Mark choose the colour blue is because he is a colour blindness of many colours except blue.That's why he choose the colour.
   He is a student at Havard University in United State Of America.He was twenty years old by that time.He took Science and Technologies coarse at Havard Universities.He is from New Yorks and lives in California.Over three million users of Facebook in 2011 is children under the age of thirteen years old.With Facebook,the are many advantages of using it.One of them is,we can communicate people in many ways such as chatting or video calls.There is no limited to communicate with them unless they are offline.
  Moreover,Facebook is the place where we can get many information such as religious information,cultural and  news around the world.We can also do many things in Facebook such as sharing photos,playing games or even sharing things that are maybe useful to other people.
   As we know,each things that has advantages comes with disadvantages.For Facebook disadvantages,it begins with wasting time.Once we are online,we will start to chat with someone.At first,the chatting is about the important things,but it will end up with nonsense.Then after a while,we wont even realise that we have online for such a while until we forgot to do other important things such as school works, house works and even our prayers.If you spend to much time with Facebook,you may be addicted to it.That is dangerous.
   Lastly,use Facebook wisely.Do not put pictures or any details that may harm yourself.


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3 comments:

  1. Assalamualaikum Ahmad Nabil Yusri..
    You are supposed to have 10 posts..
    so, please update your blog ok..
    Thanks so much...=)))

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  2. Yes Nabil..
    10 posts ok
    so, update your blog
    i want to read more posts from you
    sincere from me - Asri

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  3. 1) Facebook was introduce by Mark Zuckenburg in 2004.He proved the world that we can communicate with other people around the world.The main colour of Facebook is blue.The reason Mark choose the colour blue is because he is a colour blindness of many colours except blue.That's why he choose the colour.

    Should be

    1) FB was introduced,
    2) The reason Mark chooses
    3) the colour blue? or the blue colour?
    4) That is why he chooses

    2) coarse? check spelling ok
    3) each things that has advantages comes with disadvantages.
    -should be 'each thing'..no -s
    4) If you spend to much time
    - too much time ok..

    p/s: i think i am quite famiiar with this essay..i hope you check the grammar because i think you are good at English..

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